To me personally I really liked this story because of the buildup from beginning to the end of the story. Especially the whole last paragraph was a big buildup how it started off with the taste, to the trees, then it went to running back to house and going into the car. I could also visualize myself in this story. I would like to see a second part of this story.
HER
This story was a very deep story and I felt bad for the character personally. Also I heard personal stories from guest speakers and who had a similar lifestyle to this story and I enjoyed reading this story.
Pokemon
This story was very short. I feel like the story could have gone a little longer. After reading it a couple times I could vision this story.